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Zaktan and His IT

The Tuesday after totally conquering Voya Nui was not shaping up to be a good day for certain people.

Some of said people were the Matoran of Voya Nui, who were now being forced to work like beasts of burden for less than minimum wage and barely a crust of bread to eat for each meal. Some were the Rahi, who were being hunted for mere sport by a certain trigger happy brown Piraka.

And yet another of them was Zaktan.

It was missing. IT was missing! How could it be missing?! His most precious possession in the world, and it was gone. OK, it had been sitting on top of his bed in his hut, then he had gone to go get some food

Im Sorry KrekkaIm so sorry.
The things the giant had to go through. His mind could not understand. The Dark Hunters, the ones he called "Partners," they were laughing at him. Even Nidhiki.Why?
"I uh...I dont understand." The giant mumbles, blood smearing his face and chest. But it wasn't his blood.
"Why aint she moving?"
The girl. She had been so sad when The Shadow One ordered the hunters to burn her village. To slaughter her family.
She was crying, so Krekka hugged her.
He hugged her, and now she wasn't moving. Wasn't breathing.
"Ya killed her!" One voice shouts from the crowed, his world and sounds soon smearing to a blur before him.
Kill.
Krek

The Final TestIt was a sight for sore eyes. The mask of life, free for the taking. The only difficulty would be in retrieving it from the lava it lay in. The Piraka looked at each other, then with no trace of subtlety made a mad dash for the mask. This dash was brought to a stop when the mask rose up, out of the magma, revealing it to be fused to the head of a familiar face. A face which grinned at them, in the sort of way that said "I'm happy to see you, but I'll be happier to see you in pieces."

It was Vezon, the seventh Piraka, split from Vezok via the Spear of Fusion. And he stood perched upon a giant spider that seemed as if it were out of the nightm

Tale of a Vorox Ch.1 The sun. Giver of life and bringer of death. One of the teachings of the Vorox. Well, Pre-Shattering that is. The primitive savages have no place for petty philosophy now. It had been countless years since the Vorox were proud warriors. Countless years since he lost his people. As he wandered the desert he couldn't help but think of the events of the past years. The reforming of Spherus Magna. The downfall of the glatorian system. The transformation of Bara Magna, his home, into a desolate wasteland populated only by the Sand Tribe, Skrall, Bone Hunters, and the occasional travelers. The agori had long since moved to newer locales creat

Bacttera War Ch 1Malrylx looked around at his surroundings seeing all the flames and corpses from the battle earlier. Feeling the effects of the adrenaline slowly wear off Malrylx took the time to study his enemy's corpse. Unfortunately Gelu stopped Malrylx by stepping in front him.
"What are these things and how do you know so much?!" Gelu asked enraged.
"I don't have time for stupid questions like that." Malrylx answered annoyed.
"I think your hiding something from all of us." Gelu continued.
Malrylx took a step back and walked to a different corpse only Gelu yet again got in his way.
"Answer my questions." Gelu demanded.
"Stay out of my way Gelu." Ma

BufoonicleThis is a parody of “Tale of the Toa,” the first Bionicle chapter book. I wrote it to sound like a MAD Magazine parody, but I haven’t gotten around to sketching any of the cartoons yet because I’m not very good at drawing robots. Until I figure out a way to convincingly do the artwork for this, I’ve just got the script to show you guys. Enjoy it! J

Disclaimer: These jokes are all written purely for the sake of humor. I don’t actually hate any of the things or people that I insult in them.

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BUFOONICLE

Tofu:
I am Tofu, leader of the mighty Toe-jam! Pe

Bionicle Mara's Story, Ch: 14Bionicle Mara's Story
Chapter 14

Everyone stared at Mason. Suddenly Ackar lunged at him, the fire Glatorian pinned the Skrall against the wall sword at his throat, "You better give us answers or I'll cut you up in so many pieces not even an Energy Hound will be able to find them all!"
The other Skrall tried to move but the other Glatorian and Toa raised their weapons. "Don't even think about it!" Kiina warned.
Mason didn't know what a Energy Hound was but he was sure of the threat, "It. . . It was Ullon's plan."
Jaller flinched at the name and rubbed his jaw, "I remember him, nice guy."
"Yes, we knew the Baterra would come here

Bionicle Mara's Story, Ch: 15Bionicle Mara's Story
Chapter 15

The next day a small group slowly made it's way towards some barren hills, Takanuva lead a group consisting of Tahu, Lewa, Kopaka, Onua, Pohatu, Ackar, Kiina and Gresh towards where the Bohrok had been last spotted since the collapse of the Matoran Universe. No one carried weapons and everyone was quiet.
"Sister Gali wasn't happy to stay behind," Lewa mention trying to lighten the grim mood.
"She needed to stay in New Atero," Tahu told him. He didn't say it but he was glad she hadn't come with them.
"Well how much further?" Kiina snapped.
"The last anyone saw them they were staying in a cave in th

Bionicle: Turaga's PetJust so you know: "regular speech" "Nuju's bird speak" thoughts emphasis Just to clear that up.

Nuju studied his translator. Matoro was gazing at some unknown point on the floor, his eyes half-glazed, his mask slightly pained. The Turaga looked at Kopaka, with whom he'd been speaking, then flicked his eyes back to Matoro. Kopaka inclined his head and said, "I shall take my leave, then." And he turned and walked out in his usual curt manner, but at least he had the decency to close the door behind him.

Matoro looked up when he heard the click of the door shutting. He looked over at Nuju, then quickly away again. Nuju was perplexed at

Assimilation - Part 1, ConversationTrox grimaced as he watched the Visorak lifting canisters out of the transport. "And what's this?" he asked the dark figure beside him, "Your latest experiment?"

"They will be... I bought them in the Southern Islands. They were worth a small fortune," Gentrax admitted, "So they had best be worth my time."

Trox stopped one of the spiders as it rolled a canister away, picking up the stasis unit with one hand. The Oohnorak quivered in fear and silently cursed its terrible luck. Trox tried to peer inside the little window of the canister. It was a small thing, cylindrical in shape, but larger than a Matoran sphere like the ones Teridax had used

Assimilation - Part 2, ConflictTek sniffed the small crumb, feeling a tad dismayed. She'd expected to find more food here than this. The Big Tunnels were supposed to be perfect for scavenging –monsters from above came down often enough that a few sweet smelling morsels were occasionally left behind, but they didn't roam around so much as to be a significant threat. This corridor in particular was usually abundant with left-overs and had recently become her self-acclaimed territory, though that was subject to debate. It wasn't doing her much good tonight, however, as she scrabbled about for some relief from her rumbling stomach.

"Tssst! Get out of here!"

BAM

Codin

Assimilation - Part 4, WasteThe Roporak stomped on the slotted edge of the widget. The Matoran coin soared into the air and landed in the second circle from the middle. The spider chirped with glee.

Its partner, a stunted Boggarak, clacked its mandibles, frustrated that it was losing. It nudged the widget back out of the circle and took its turn. The widget landed on the line of the outermost circle. A Visorak spider resting there looked closely at the widget, then looked up and shook its head. The Roporak gnashed its teeth in a nauseating laugh and the Boggarak chattered furiously, pushing another scrap of Rahi meat into the Roporak's pile.

Above, a lone Hoto swooped

Monsters are RealMike's efforts to slow the Rahkshi were in vain and his heels dragged in the ground. They took him down a hallway and into a small room where a chair stood in the middle. He was forced into the chair and had his hands cuffed to it. The Rahkshi walked out, ignoring Mike's struggle for freedom. He pulled his arms as hard as he could until he heard a dark chuckle from behind and froze. The air around him became cold and the sound of heavy footsteps came his way. He turned his head to see a pair of legs. As he slowly looked up his heart sank. The tall, mechanical being was black and had green, piercing eyes. He smiled and knelt down to eye level.

Dare to Dream IX - FoundRustle, rustle, rustle.
Tetak and Nia halted their walk. There were many noises in the jungle, but the rustling in the bushes up ahead indicated a creature was approaching. And it was getting closer.
"Get back," Nia whispered to Tetak. She stepped in front of him and kept her eyes on the bushes.
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Laza was covered in dirt, vines and cobwebs. She kept moving through the forest, grabbing tree branches and trunks for support. Twigs snapped beneath her feet and gnats swarmed her face. She swatted at them continuously, but they were persistent. Laza could not tell where she was headed. The vegetation was thick and she couldn't see mo

Dare to Dream II - Darkness Tetak was on a cart, heading to the village of lightning. It was a small transport that could only fit a handful of matoran. It was pulled by rahi that were known for scaling mountains. Inside the cart were three sections. Each section was at a different height of around five feet apart while the base of the cart matched the incline of the mountain path. This allowed everything to remain level on the inside. In the section with Tetak was another passenger; a matoran of lightning. When he first got on, Tetak did not say a word, but merely greeted her with a small smi

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Bionicle: My Master

by ~LockmanCapulet, Jan 1, 2012, 5:53:40 PM
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My Master
By LockmanCapulet

I knew nothing but instinct before my master came.

When he first came to the altar-cave and touched the Life, I felt the power, the Life itself, flow into me from where his feet touched my back, where they did not move from. I felt my legs grow, my jaws expand, my fangs sharpen. I felt… alive.

The Life made me know that I was to guard it, and that he was my master.

My master.

He was me and I was him. I knew what he was from and what made him, the weapon he had. He knew me and my capabilities. They were his, too. When we were attacked, we would get stronger. Most things could not hurt us. We were perfect to guard the Life.

The first six came, the ones my master came from. With the power he came from, my master made two of them one and made the one fight the others. He made the one into two again, and left them all asleep.

For now, my master- and the Life- were safe.

The next six came a short time after. They were better than the first. They had their own powers like the Life, but different. We fought them for longer than the other six. They pushed us back, and my master and I fell in the magma in the altar-cave. I thought we would die.

But we didn't. My legs grew joints and claws, my body stretched, and wings grew from my back. I was a new creature. My master and I rose from the magma, startling the new six. He spoke to them, then we fought more. While we fought, one of the new six used his power to make the Life talk to my master. The Life wanted to be with one of the new six, not him.

Not my master.

My master was angered and made us fight even harder. The battle raged on for what seemed like forever. But then…

It all stopped.

The next thing I knew, my master was off of me. The Life was somewhere else. I was free, and I was powerful. I flew to the surface, knowing that I needed him no longer.

Him, my master.

I knew nothing but instinct after my master left.

Bionicle: My Masterby ~LockmanCapulet

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EDIT 1/22/13: Did a decent amount of editing. Changed a few terms that seemed either too complex or too primitive for Fenrakk to use (IE, "unconcious" to "asleep"). Also removed the whole "face" motif.

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A short Bionicle narrative I wrote from the perspective of Fenrakk/Kardas. What do you guys think?

Bionicle, Fenrakk/Kardas, Vezon, the Toa Inika, Piraka (c) LEGO

~traykendude21 Jan 7, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Marvelous! The repetition of the phrase "my master" was almost haunting.
Soooooo good!

~LockmanCapulet Jan 7, 2012 Student General Artist

thanks! That's the idea that I was trying to display- how Vezon still haunts him, even though the two are no longer fused together.

~traykendude21 Jan 7, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

That is epic, really. Not many pay much attention to Fenrakk as a character. (Not that Lego even alluded to his role as major.)
It's unique and interesting.

Keep writing. You make a great author.

~LockmanCapulet Jan 8, 2012 Student General Artist

Thank you! I appreciate the feedback!

~LoneWolfB312 Jan 1, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

nice

I wondering whose POV this was until i read the description

~LockmanCapulet Jan 2, 2012 Student General Artist

thanks man!

~Codin-the-Fe-Matoran Jan 1, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Very, very well done.

I loved the poetic ending and the way you wrote as though these were truly Fenrakk's memories on paper.

~LockmanCapulet Jan 2, 2012 Student General Artist

thank you!!!

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